In the Garden Bed

In the garden bed falls moondust. Rose lust - tall and fluorescent. Lullaby scent, rapt and florid. Deep scent - torrid, quiescent. 10/4/2022 Bitesize Poem Sponsor: Line Gauthier
With thanks to Jeff Kyser for introducing us to this form: Séadna Mòr https://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/seadna-mor/ 8 (2 syll end word) x x x x x x (x a) 7 (3 syll end word) x a x x (x x b) 8 (2 syll end word) x x x b x x (x c) 7 (3 syll end word) x b x c (x x b)
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Nicholsen Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 8:00 AM
divine pastel rapture lovely piece
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Thank you!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Cosmic Symphony, your words, my dearest Kim! Be blessed!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Thank you! xx
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 11:21 PM
Best wishes for your beautiful bitesize poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Thank you xx
Salehi Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:35 PM
This is a nice painting... painted with words...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Oh thank you, Pashang!
DiMino Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Passion throughout this great kingdom that God created. The greatest poet, artist of all is Our Glorious Creator. Love this passionate work of yours. Brilliant!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 11:47 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:42 AM
Wow. Beautiful Kim. Well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Kyser Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:08 AM
See, that's lovely. I will have to keep trying. Well done, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Thank you, Jeff! I enjoyed writing one too!
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