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In the Garden Bed

In the garden bed falls moondust. Rose lust - tall and fluorescent. Lullaby scent, rapt and florid. Deep scent - torrid, quiescent. 10/4/2022 Bitesize Poem Sponsor: Line Gauthier
With thanks to Jeff Kyser for introducing us to this form: Séadna Mòr https://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/seadna-mor/ 8 (2 syll end word) x x x x x x (x a) 7 (3 syll end word) x a x x (x x b) 8 (2 syll end word) x x x b x x (x c) 7 (3 syll end word) x b x c (x x b)

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Date: 10/15/2022 8:00:00 AM
divine pastel rapture lovely piece
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2022 4:19:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 10/15/2022 6:30:00 AM
Cosmic Symphony, your words, my dearest Kim! Be blessed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2022 4:19:00 PM
Thank you! xx
Date: 10/14/2022 11:21:00 PM
Best wishes for your beautiful bitesize poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2022 4:19:00 PM
Thank you xx
Date: 10/14/2022 10:35:00 PM
This is a nice painting... painted with words...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2022 4:19:00 PM
Oh thank you, Pashang!
Date: 10/14/2022 10:53:00 AM
Passion throughout this great kingdom that God created. The greatest poet, artist of all is Our Glorious Creator. Love this passionate work of yours. Brilliant!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2022 11:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 10/14/2022 9:42:00 AM
Wow. Beautiful Kim. Well done :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2022 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 10/14/2022 9:08:00 AM
See, that's lovely. I will have to keep trying. Well done, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2022 9:20:00 AM
Thank you, Jeff! I enjoyed writing one too!

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