In the Fragility of Dreams

A world full of wonder, yet so small
Uncontrollable, inevitable, fantastical
Dashed in a single waking moment
Unanticipated, complicated, dissipated
Close to the heart, a guarded secret
Defensive, sensitive, subjective
Locked away, it dies
Unresponsive, inactive, unproductive
Yet unleashed, it thrives
Progressive, excessive, receptive
The fragility of dreams
Elusive. Impulsive. Creative.




5/18/20 for Silent One’s In the Fragility of Dreams Contest
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Flaherty Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:20 PM
Sweet Dreams Olivia
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 2:22 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Olivia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Estep Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 7:00 AM
Thanks! Dreams can be fulfilled, but only if you are brave enough to reach out and grab them. -Olivia
Mishra Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Lovely use of words Olivia. Congratulations on your win :)
One Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 7:05 AM
You ended it very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 7:41 PM
I love the flow of this descriptive write, Olivia. Best of luck in the contest and thanks for your visit to my poem, Edinburgh! I would love to go there someday. My grandmother's family is from Dunfermline which is just north of there...xx Rhonda
Estep Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Thanks!
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