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In the Fragility of Dreams

When roses proffer prickly thorns And wilted flowers deliberately mock Forlorn garden of my passions torn, When winds of love are gusting cold As night invokes banished woes And horrid storm wrecks my coast And tides turn wild to sink my boat As heart aches in beats lovelorn, To touch my soul, you come along. Beautiful you’re beyond my dreams-- Brown eyes beaming bold appeal, A dimple adorns blushing cheeks Gleaming style of radiant smile, Just as I had imagined you would be. How splendorous is your royal abode! Where rare jewels glint arched entrance Greeting me gently into your mahal-- Imperial charm of intricate patterns Woven in petals of heavenly fragrance. “This is our place,” longingly you say Hanging our portraits on walls of grace, Mementos of desires are already there Toasting rendezvous of love ornate. And happily I stay there in your embrace In the fragility of dreams utopia creates. May 18, 2020 In the fragility of dreams poetry contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2020 2:33:00 PM

- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/27/2020 3:07:00 PM

Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/27/2020 1:34:00 PM

Your poem creates another world with your blissful emotions and beautiful imagery. Also, the wonderful way in which you have placed the words creates a soothing effect. Congratulations on your win Vijay. Glad to see your name in the list :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/27/2020 3:06:00 PM

Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 5/27/2020 8:00:00 AM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/27/2020 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 5/27/2020 5:57:00 AM

Your poem is full or enchantment and romance... seems like a great place to be... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/27/2020 3:06:00 PM

Thank you SO--much apprecaite.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/25/2020 5:15:00 PM

Enchanting beyond words is your perception and interpretation of dreams! You have created a so charming world with your metaphoric words and poetic mind! Thank you so much, dear Vijay, for the joy of the read! I highly cherish in my fave list.. Best regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/25/2020 5:23:00 PM

I know I have been missing your poetry and your delightful comments. So glad you are back. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always, Besma. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.