Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

In the Fragility of Dreams

When roses proffer prickly thorns
And wilted flowers deliberately mock
Forlorn garden of my passions torn,

When winds of love are gusting cold
As night invokes banished woes
And horrid storm wrecks my coast
And tides turn wild to sink my boat
As heart aches in beats lovelorn,
To touch my soul, you come along.

Beautiful you’re beyond my dreams--
Brown eyes beaming bold appeal,
A dimple adorns blushing cheeks
Gleaming style of radiant smile,
Just as I had imagined you would be.

How splendorous is your royal abode!
Where rare jewels glint arched entrance
Greeting me gently into your mahal--
Imperial charm of intricate patterns
Woven in petals of heavenly fragrance.

“This is our place,” longingly you say
Hanging our portraits on walls of grace,
Mementos of desires are already there
Toasting rendezvous of love ornate.

And happily I stay there in your embrace
In the fragility of dreams utopia creates.

May 18, 2020
In the fragility of dreams poetry contest
Sponsor: Silent One

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Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2020 at 2:33 PM - Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit May 27, 2020 at 3:07 PM Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 1:34 PM Your poem creates another world with your blissful emotions and beautiful imagery. Also, the wonderful way in which you have placed the words creates a soothing effect. Congratulations on your win Vijay. Glad to see your name in the list :) Vijay Pandit May 27, 2020 at 3:06 PM Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks.

Joseph May May 27, 2020 at 8:00 AM Dropping back with Congrats on your win Vijay Vijay Pandit May 27, 2020 at 3:06 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Silent One May 27, 2020 at 5:57 AM Your poem is full or enchantment and romance... seems like a great place to be... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Vijay Pandit May 27, 2020 at 3:06 PM Thank you SO--much apprecaite.

Besma Riabi Dziri May 25, 2020 at 5:15 PM Enchanting beyond words is your perception and interpretation of dreams! You have created a so charming world with your metaphoric words and poetic mind! Thank you so much, dear Vijay, for the joy of the read! I highly cherish in my fave list.. Best regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit May 25, 2020 at 5:23 PM I know I have been missing your poetry and your delightful comments. So glad you are back. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always, Besma. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Judy Ball May 23, 2020 at 9:29 AM What a beautiful dream you describe here. Absolutely lovely description and deep longing emotion. excellent. God Bless and stay well my friend. JB Vijay Pandit May 23, 2020 at 9:41 AM Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy May 20, 2020 at 8:09 AM Beautiful, romantic description of the change from heartache to joy, Vijay. Janice Vijay Pandit May 20, 2020 at 9:21 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole May 19, 2020 at 1:57 PM She is a dream come true. In these moments that you so beautifully express. In a dream, anything is possible. : ) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 4:24 PM So true--anything is possible in dreams. Much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.

Mike Gentile May 19, 2020 at 1:47 PM Splendid imagery here Vijay, very rich and clear! Good Luck on the contest!!! Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 4:22 PM So kind of you Mike--much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May May 19, 2020 at 12:08 PM She comes along when all seems lost gleaming with a smile...Beautiful write Vijay, best wishes Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 4:22 PM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Harry Horsman May 19, 2020 at 2:05 AM Classic poetry, Vijay, a joy to read. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 6:31 AM So kind of you Harry--many thanks--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos May 19, 2020 at 1:32 AM Brilliant write Vijay. Good luck in the contest, Blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 6:31 AM Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues May 18, 2020 at 4:54 PM Must beautiful! Love: Greeting me gently into your mahal-- a clever line! Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 6:31 AM Thank you Kim--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2020 at 1:56 PM - Simply amazing written, Vijay - Love it ... another winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 6:30 AM Happy to read your cheerful feedback, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham May 18, 2020 at 1:29 PM Deep and romantic Vijay, you write these so well. Good luck in the contest Tom Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 6:29 AM So very kind of you Tom--much appreciate--many thanks.

Arturo Michael May 18, 2020 at 12:07 PM Rightly said, in the fragility of dreams...Well done my friend Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 6:29 AM Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.