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In the Fragility of Dreams:

The untold story of me~ "I am a bereaved Mother". Two years ago life dipped me in a critical smother This will permit many of you to bother.. As you read this narrated free rhyming verses one after another. In my womb there was a tiny little seed growing with delicacy: Wondering what was happening outside it's room with ecstasy. Hearing to Lovable voices now & again happily,Sinking with my feelings greatly,Growing inside safely, Hoping to come and view the world successfully. But the hope did not last for long and soon became a sad symbolic song.. I dreamt endlessly of the unborn child:Not so wild but yet closely mild. There was lot of happiness built with family member's curiousness; But in a real short span of time ..All our dream went in vain. Everyday my sleepless heart cries alike the pouring rain..Bearing this high implacable pain..!! 18-5-2020 ~DEEPA~ Second Place in the Contest. Note:*In the fragility of dreams Poetry Contest* Sponsored by Silent One Third place in the Contest. Note:BRIAN'S CHOICE Y,any form, any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand Third place in the Contest. Note:Sleepless - Old or New poetry Contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 3:01:00 AM

Every time I read this, I feel numb and pray for healing the wounds. Congratulations on another win for this beautiful heartfelt write Deepa

V. Deepa
Date: 6/17/2020 11:24:00 AM

Hai mam, Thanks a bunch...for re-reading my work..:-) I feel truly honoured by your constant uplifting tone and gracious words.:-) Take care.With love~Deepa

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/16/2020 11:32:00 PM

This is such a sad but beautifully penned poem V. My first two children were very difficult to bring into this world and I had to spend 6 months in bed with each my daughter then my son, ever worried they would not be born so I can relate somewhat with your sensitive words. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo

V. Deepa
Date: 6/17/2020 11:18:00 AM

Hello mam, I can understand the pain and difficulties that you underwent .. I believe your children are doing well in their life now.They are truly blessed & lucky to get a sacrificing mum like you.:-) Will pray for you to be healthy and energetic forever.^_^ Thankyou for empathizing and showering motivational words upon me. Thanks for the lovely appreciation& blessings too.:-) Take care.With love~Deepa

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2020 1:31:00 PM

V, there are some grammar issues in this poem or it would have placed higher. I could really feel the pain you described and it was heart wrenching. Congratulations on your place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

V. Deepa
Date: 6/17/2020 11:08:00 AM

Hello mam, Thankyou very much for your warm appreciations and encouragement.Oh..is it?! I would love to know those grammar issues in the work..So that I can correct them. Hope you will teach me mam.:-) Best wishes for you too..:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2020 2:31:00 PM

- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, V :) - // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 5/28/2020 7:03:00 AM

Hello mam, Yes I agree to your beautiful words,its indeed inspiring.:-) Thankyou for your appreciation.:-) I liked your poem .. congratulations for your win too....:-):-) Take care.With regards ~Deepa

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/27/2020 1:37:00 PM

Your words reflect the agony you must feel Deepa! May you always be blessed with peace and love. Congratulations on your win and take care. :)

V. Deepa
Date: 5/28/2020 6:55:00 AM

Thankyou mam ..for the kind appreciation and for being empathizing... Take care you too.:-)

Silent One

Date: 5/27/2020 6:01:00 AM

A deeply sad take on the contest.. I felt the pain and anguish in your poem.. Sorry that you had to go through this.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

V. Deepa
Date: 5/27/2020 7:04:00 AM

Thankyou for the placement and your warm appreciation sir.:-) I am pleased to read your condolences.No need to feel sorry sir Grief is a part and parcel in everybody's life.We as human beings just need to empathise and support each other to overcome the tragical situations. Have a great day sir:-) Take care with regards ~Deepa

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/23/2020 1:19:00 PM

Deepa Your hurt is so evident in this poem! It is hard to pacify someone with such a loss but God must have a plan and a reason. God bless

V. Deepa
Date: 5/24/2020 2:39:00 AM

Thankyou for your kind words and blessings sir.:-) And yes this is my true experience (not imagination) Very difficult to come out from the situation.And though we human's come across happiness ,the hurt stays in the corner of the heart untill death.Yes it's all with God's wonderful plans sir. With regards. Take care:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/18/2020 2:40:00 PM

Hello Deepa, at a time like this it seems that all our dreams went in vain. Have a nice day my friend. Enjoy your day.

V. Deepa
Date: 5/20/2020 6:45:00 AM

Yes I agree mam. Have a great day:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/19/2020 1:32:00 PM

Hello Deepa, there is always light at the end of the tunnel. We must find the light. enjoy your day my friend.

V. Deepa
Date: 5/19/2020 7:23:00 AM

Hello mam, Yes, obviously when our dreams are destroyed it's a very big loss.Happiness flies away.. leaving us to drown in sorrows. You too have a great day mam.:-)