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In the Fragility of Dreams

In the fragility of dreams Slowly withers with the complexities Of life while also overshadowing Flowers on tufts of whorled branches and leaves Drowning bleakness in unforgiving world An infinitude of grief, death has stolen Whilst the imperfections human has claimed Infinity of disregarded blithe And the unforgotten echoing sounds While dreams grow bonding loss souls on restless Moonless indigo sky, no stars dangle Insidious sleep a chance of finding Fragile trouble soul disastrous defeats Which still doth grow fragility of dreams 5/18/2020

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Date: 5/27/2020 2:26:00 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery to portray hope in fragility. Congratulations on your win Eve :)
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Date: 5/27/2020 6:48:00 AM
Lovely imagery and i feel the words in your poem.. so well expressed.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/21/2020 8:33:00 PM
Dreams are the place where our mind dares not go and our imagination takes over; I can tell by this marvelous poem that you feel this in a magnificent way, Eve.
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Date: 5/19/2020 2:02:00 AM
Wow, Eve, this is amazing poetry, best i've read in a long time..To my favourites.
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Date: 5/18/2020 8:22:00 PM
Lovely write, dear friend. Best wishes for the contest and I send you love with blessings from above, Gina
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:08:00 PM
"Insidious sleep a chance of finding" one of the great lines in your poem...Well done Eve...All the best
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