William J. Jr. Atfield Poet Rhyme

In the Final Analysis

In the final Analysis

Destiny – she seems to, always be shutting the gate.
She has been, closing in, her garden on my fate.
She has been given the opportunity to know my dreams, 
but nothing of my desires, does she want, it seems.
I would love to know the sun setting in her Autumn green eyes,
To lie the night long / the morning into the sun rise 
from her beautiful face, feel the warmth – hidden – it could bring
to this aching heart, this alone soul, my world, to make birds sing.
The pain, the heart ache, much to great- for my desire, 
to live on with the direction it has been heading – ashes from fire
are what I feel, dust - I can not, will not pay for what is not for me.
The price to high for a foundation weak – to high the fee
for what does not already exist – really – as I see
it – in what does not come from the heart.
Expectations of trivial matters ! – pursuits of ?, - no place to start !

B. J. “A” 2
January 23rd 2007

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 28, 2012 at 4:34 PM Nice read tonight William , another sad o e though xx William J. Jr. Atfield November 28, 2012 at 5:27 PM How true Mandy, the pursuit of thr Princess was a very sad place to be. that was then and this is now. six years later. there is still a life time of heartache inbetween. that is life my Dear, and thank you for the compliment. Bill.