In the Fields In Which We Whistle

In the fields in which we whistle…
In death I have faced,
In depth my heart paced,
Your race, that your turn will end,
It’s not as scary,
Still slightly weary,
It’s not as bad as you have imagined.

What is worse for you? 
Pain and suffering true,
Is the thought of it as worse than it is?
Are you scared to miss?
 All the things you come to love and kiss,
Not to know what the future holds for you. 

Our earth and human existence,
What will become of them?
What inventions will be discovered?
And secrets uncovered,
What songs will be heard? Movies to be seen,
with new stars of stage and screen.

What I believe death is not our foe,
Or our worst enemy or welcomed guest,
The choice is ours for the one last breath,
For those who want to choose our dismissal,
What I believe is our greatest strength,
Is our fight for survival in the fields in which we whistle…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/4/2014 8:59:00 PM
excellent pen old pal great to see you here
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David Bucknell
Date: 12/4/2014 9:08:00 PM
LIAM.........my friend, found this site awhile back, just started writng on here again......great to have. Someone I know here.......David.......
Date: 6/10/2013 8:02:00 PM
Hi David , a deep approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:58:00 PM
David,, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:17:00 AM
Good morning David, a nice sound, for good reason. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 5/31/2013 1:17:00 PM
David, a good poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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