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In the Fields

I can smell the fresh mint, In the fields by the pond, I can see your shining face, Your hair bleached to blonde. The water dancing on your skin, As we swam the day away, The clouds we watched passing by, As we lay on our backs that day. Nighttime again, And the stars like jewels in the sky, No sooner had we fallen asleep, The night had passed us by. Bright sunshine is cast into the room, A new day had begun, Already my mind was thinking, What there had to be done. I would watch you dance, With a ribbon in your hair, Your movements smooth and graceful, As you twirled through the air. It is in a dream world, That we have become friends, The world around us falls apart, But our happiness never ends. I hope the years will be kind, When I have to leave this place, But I will always remember, The sweet smile on your face. We have shared timeless youth, In the fields by the pond, I can see your shining face, Your hair bleached to blonde.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 3:48:00 AM
Lisa - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:08:00 PM
Lisa - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/27/2008 3:06:00 PM
Hi Lisa Congrats on your amazing poem making the semi-finals and good luck in the finals! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/4/2008 10:33:00 AM
we all have these dreams. they only last for a short time then the summers over. and all we have left are these words reminders of what once was.jhl
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Date: 9/4/2008 7:25:00 AM
Lisa, your poem In the Fields presents profound memories -beautifully worded poem. Congrats on its being featured this week. -Mohammad
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Date: 9/2/2008 8:07:00 AM
Lisa, this was just outright beautiful. What a pleasant poem. Congratulations on it being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/1/2008 8:32:00 PM
Splendid work on this featured poem of the week - Congrats - God Bless
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Date: 8/31/2008 8:39:00 PM
Youth is such a carefree time. Too bad it is so short. The title fits your poem well. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2008 6:19:00 PM
Beautiful memory to treasure. Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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