In the Evening Silence.

Here on the sands of Half Moon
          I yearn of those days I held you
	Breathed of you…
          Days of untold passions tasted
	Unrequited love	…
				Innocence pure

Where the world escaped you and I
          Sadness was just a word for others
	Nonexistent shame …
          Contented in that arduous cycle 
	Where we shared of…
				Only two


Perhaps if time were truly flowing and fluid
          And soft words were medicine enough
	Easing your pains…
          I would whisper you back to our moment
	Bereft of the guilt…
				Death carries


Here on the sands of Half Moon
          I’m carried back on moonlit glow
	Breathing of you…
          Amassed in the need of our lost voices of
	Unrequited love…
				Reborn again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 12:16 PM
have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today Charles. I hope to be back soon to read them again. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 11:34 AM
sweet style of writing! Charles...Jim
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July 29, 2008 at 8:09 PM
Nice reflection on love. I like the interesting and creative format you used to share your thoughts. Keep on writing! Karen
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 25, 2008 at 5:15 PM
I was reading this and remembering David Loggins. He also wrote some great stuff, including 3 dog night's "Pieces of April." Before your time! Vince
Bulger Avatar
July 23, 2008 at 8:27 PM
my what deep, wonderful words in an art! simply beautifully profound. My best regards always, Lucinda (p.s I was honored that you listed my poem "before the breaking dawn" as a favorite.. wow, thank you :)
Chamma Avatar
July 17, 2008 at 1:59 PM
Memories...How much of them are there? Thank you for sharing Charles... Always, TYOne
Reynolds Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 4:52 AM
Ahhhh, I feel like I am there on that beach breathing in moonlight and memory...lovely, just lovely. Love Kristin
Babcock Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 10:16 PM
A beautiful write on feelings for a past love. God Bless Phyl
Sheart Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 11:34 AM
Hello Charles The depth of love is eternal and grows deeper every day in ones own knowing and ones own longing to embrace it in the now even if we can't do that physically. When we can't we miss it so much.This is such a beautiful poem I read it a couple of times....Very creative and well expressed. It touches one deeply. Thanks for sharing this with us! Love Light Truth Patricia
Winter Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 11:00 AM
Wow. Got chills with this one. Intense love and emotion of almost magical depths. The line "Sadness was just a word for others..." rings so true, in my memory of love also. Hope you find what you seek. Magnificent write. Love, Shar
Degenhardt Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 10:38 AM
The reflection of a love that's gone shows pure and honest feelings. Terrific flow to this romantic and haunting write. Michael
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