In the Essence of Soft Shadows

Although our age is now written upon our face
In the essence of soft shadows, at twilight
For a brief moment my love 
We look like the day we first met
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Radke Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 10:08 AM
This is beautiful. You’ve said so much in so few words. Excellent writing. Deb
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November 5, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit, Deb. It's greatly appreciated ~Warren
Sharp Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 1:26 PM
This is very moody and evocative. Brief, but very artfully worded.
Doll Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thanks for the compliments and visit, Lawrence.
Thomas Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 2:09 PM
This is very unique Warren. And a beautiful thought to share :)
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July 10, 2018 at 5:05 PM
I'm glad that you liked it, FJ Thomas. Thanks for your visit.// Warren :)
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 1:57 PM
aww so touching and romantic - i too will lurk in the shadows and make sure hubby has his rose tinted glasses on lol :-) hugs jan xx
Doll Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Thank You, Jan. You made me laugh!
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May 14, 2018 at 2:40 PM
- Sounds beautiful, Warren :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 14, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Great to hear from you, :) All the best-Warren
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May 11, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Oh, this is so sweet Warren. I will make sure that I only stand in soft shadows from now on !!!
Doll Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Me too! Thanks Mike.
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