In the End, We Will All Be Light

I saw that light
Beautifully burning and slightly confused
Crazed white bodies dancing around it.

The electrons buzzed inside of you
with ever so much complacency.
What do you choose?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 8, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Ashly Broadway-Altier, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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July 4, 2015 at 12:32 AM
Ashly, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
Norman Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 3:09 PM
'with ever so much complacency' never a truer word spoken. i enjoyed your poem, and i choose light. love and light fellow human
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