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In the End

Silent, sarcastic sneering
Dark, deadly deliberation
Ignoring ignited ire
Foolish fervor over fateful follies.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 3, 2010 at 9:06 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Shelli. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Shelli Davis

May 31, 2010 at 6:59 PM

Thank you for all your soupport!!!

May 31, 2010 at 2:41 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Janette Fisher

April 12, 2010 at 12:13 PM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Ernilando Tugaff

April 12, 2010 at 12:08 PM

Congratulations on this well-crafted piece of art. Wish you more success. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 12, 2010 at 11:09 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Shelli. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Joanna Smith

February 18, 2010 at 1:08 PM

this poem is inticing, i have been reading it over and over contemplating the many different meanings it could have and it is very versitile! i think it's great it has a short of dark and beautiful combination that you dont see alot. great piece! =)Jo

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 3, 2010 at 10:25 AM

It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poem today Shelli. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol

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