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In the End

Silent, sarcastic sneering Dark, deadly deliberation Ignoring ignited ire Foolish fervor over fateful follies.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Shelli. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Shelli Davis

Date: 5/31/2010 6:59:00 PM

Thank you for all your soupport!!!

Date: 5/31/2010 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Janette Fisher

Date: 4/12/2010 12:13:00 PM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/12/2010 12:08:00 PM

Congratulations on this well-crafted piece of art. Wish you more success. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2010 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Shelli. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 1:08:00 PM

this poem is inticing, i have been reading it over and over contemplating the many different meanings it could have and it is very versitile! i think it's great it has a short of dark and beautiful combination that you dont see alot. great piece! =)Jo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/3/2010 10:25:00 AM

It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poem today Shelli. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol