In the Distant Beauty of Another Place

In The Distant Beauty of Another Place


Four strings, smooth hand oiled skin,
imbued with joy’s countless hours.
A friend to one so lonely,
a voice to her silent awakening heart
each movement a dance
in the distant beauty of another place.

Her rosined bow coaxing sweetness
from the inanimate wood and string,
subtle hands speaking of her dreams,
her fears, her desire to be free –

As free as the haunting vibrations
emanating through her being –
awakening the fervor of her love
arousing the awareness of her passion.

 Old strings embraced by young hands
renewed by love’s request,
responding to the sensuous touch
of beauty’s siren song.

Dimmed lights, hushed crowd,
four strings dance with rosined bow,
soft tears speaking through varnished wood
in the distant beauty of another place.


John G. Lawless
12/20/2014

submitted to – Let The Music Play On – poetry contest
sponsor – Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Lovely, John...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
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January 2, 2015 at 11:05 PM
John, Congratulations!!! A sweet "Let The Music Play On, WIN." Love Linda
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations on your win, John. Wonderful imagery and feelings. Best wishes for the new year. Sandra
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Great work here,congrats on the John...huggs
Roper Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Jphn,beautiful write, congratulations on your win. Blessings to you for the coming year
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Such incredible imagery this was sweet music to my heart to read - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx - its a 7 from me
Lawless Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Thanks Jan for your kind words and high praise.
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