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In the Distance

The sea heaves and shudders, white caps jittery as if moved by wrongs Sun, water, clouds merge - a far off fusion Horizon opens to an endless blue, hanging low like a hot air balloon Boy at the ship's railing, hunched over, arms crossed, his head resting on his limbs Gaze entrenched, anchored about the sail to an isle of sandy beaches, to turquoise, shallow waters, vibrant palm tree shading To contemplate outward, about what strains attachment about choices that salt the air where to draw his lines Meditation, spaces to explore Boy on the teen ledge of growth, to consider different roles to deliver different scripts A lurch to awareness, uncharted waters, unsettling speed He fights to focus, to know the gentle sweep of waves to peer beyond the sea's edge as equator light glints his face in gold Poem composed: March 18, 2021 revised: November 2, 2022

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Date: 4/1/2021 7:06:00 AM
This is a brilliant free verse with amazing imagery and alliteration, Brian:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/1/2021 7:33:00 AM
Thank you, Edward. Your assessment is most kind. My nephew's concentrated gaze towards the horizon sparked my pen. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 3/31/2021 1:54:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Brian! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/31/2021 2:02:00 PM
Greetings Kim, Thanks very much for the reaffirming comment. The young boy at the railing of the cruise ship was my eager nephew looking beyond the Caribbean horizon to life opportunities that unspool. Best wishes, Brian

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