In the Distance

The sea heaves and shudders, white caps jittery
      as if moved by wrongs
Sun, water, clouds merge - a far off fusion
Horizon opens to an endless blue,
      hanging low like a hot air balloon 

Boy at the ship's railing, hunched over, arms crossed,
      his head resting on his limbs
Gaze entrenched, anchored
      about the sail
      to an isle of sandy beaches, 
      to turquoise, shallow waters,
      vibrant palm tree shading
To contemplate outward, 
      about what strains attachment
      about choices that salt the air
      where to draw his lines
                                 
Meditation, spaces to explore
Boy on the teen ledge of growth,
      to consider different roles
      to deliver different scripts
A lurch to awareness, uncharted waters,
      unsettling speed

He fights to focus,
      to know the gentle sweep of waves
      to peer beyond the sea's edge
      as equator light glints his face in gold





Poem composed: March 18, 2021
revised: November 2, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ibeh Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 7:06 AM
This is a brilliant free verse with amazing imagery and alliteration, Brian:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
Sambourne Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, Edward. Your assessment is most kind. My nephew's concentrated gaze towards the horizon sparked my pen. Sincerest regards, Brian
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Wonderful imagery, Brian! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Sambourne Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Greetings Kim, Thanks very much for the reaffirming comment. The young boy at the railing of the cruise ship was my eager nephew looking beyond the Caribbean horizon to life opportunities that unspool. Best wishes, Brian
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