Kayod5 Kayode Poet Free verse

In the Desert

In the desert

 Not in the midst of surplus
 Nor in chamber of comfort
 That thou my love examining
 But take thee me to the desert
 Upon her thirsty roasted sand
 There task thee me for liquor
 Like rain without cloud I fall;
 There thou shall know my love  
 When with smile I lift my queen 
 Where camels proceed no more.



 Name : Kayod5
 Contest title : In the desert
 Date : 9/15/2014.

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Casarah Nance September 22, 2014 at 6:52 AM Congrats on your winner:) I like that line-like rain without a cloud I fall- Kayod5 Kayode September 22, 2014 at 7:46 AM Thank you Casarah

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2014 at 12:27 PM - Kayod5, just came back to congratulate you on your win:) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Kayod5 Kayode September 21, 2014 at 1:46 PM Thanks Anne.

Robert Lindley September 21, 2014 at 10:35 AM Congrats on a great write and fine win!! Kayod5 Kayode September 21, 2014 at 11:35 AM Thank you Robert , nice to have you here.

Pandita Sietesantos September 20, 2014 at 4:23 PM Congratulations on your well-deserved great win! Pandita Kayod5 Kayode September 21, 2014 at 11:37 AM Thank you Pandita,nice to have you here.

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2014 at 3:14 PM flawlessly scribed with a mood that entices, kayod..proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans September 20, 2014 at 11:31 AM Congratulations on your win Kayod5.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 20, 2014 at 5:35 AM Dropping back to congratulate you on a fine win, Kayod5 Kayod5 Kayode September 20, 2014 at 7:41 AM Thank you Sir, this a win I will not forget soon,considering how high I place the sponsor cum the examiner.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2014 at 11:00 AM - Kayod5, I like your suggestion for this contest - Lovely written (I just posted my) - Good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Kayod5 Kayode September 15, 2014 at 2:05 PM Thank you Anne,nice to read from you.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 15, 2014 at 10:20 AM Nice done poem on the theme of In the desert, Kayod5 Kayod5 Kayode September 15, 2014 at 10:48 AM Thank you Dr. , I am happy you love it.