In the Depths of Memory

When my imagination soars on adventurous wings
I'm a runaway carousel horse; a kite without strings
an ugly duckling evolving into a beautiful white swan,
the first glimmer of morning, and my name is Dawn,
but one thing I never envisioned was being all alone...
...and so I wrote a poem about the great love I've known.

At first meeting, my heart blushed; my mind said 'beware.'
We talked forever; secrets freely shared without a care
His smile was slightly crooked and reached his hazel eyes
Our farewell still haunts me because it came as a surprise
Sometimes my heart still sinks in the depths of memory,
borne on crested waves, crashing upon a turbulent sea.

No longer do we exchange intimate whispers in the dark
No candlelight kisses; no flames of fire without a spark
I see him in dreams, walking in corridors of my mind
Searching for me, but my threshold he cannot find
I feared I would stumble over the words I wanted to say
...and so I wrote a poem to help him discover the way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 6:37 AM
A surprise farewell...sometimes welcomed, and others not. Great write Jenna! Good luck in the contest! Linda
Logan Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Thank you very much, Linda.
Kauffman Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Marvelous take on the theme, Jenna. "And so I wrote a poem to help him discover the way," a wonderful conclusion. All the best of harvest blessings.
Logan Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:41 PM
The ending kind of had a mind of its own, so I followed its lead. lol Happens sometimes. Thanks so much for liking it, Sam.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:31 PM
WOW... This should definitely WIN. I LOVE It... a fave and a blessing to read! LOVE LOVE LOVE this. God bless you with many more amazing and awesome words to have your reader dreaming of
Logan Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:40 PM
I hesitated writing for this contest, and this morning all the lines just started falling into place. Thank you for your enthusiastic remarks, Regina. Whether it places or not, I'm delighted by the response.
Poetry Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Excellent visual...I could sense it all
Logan Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Thank you for feeling my words, TS.
Michael Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 8:32 AM
A flow as natural as a waterfall...Well done
Logan Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Your comments are so encouraging. Thank you, Arturo.
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