Melinde Guadalupe Poet Rhyme

In the Deep Sea

I'm in the secret world of my imagination
A place of unique and amazing creation
In a place where i can walk in slow motion
In the deep sea, yes, that's my location

In here I'm independent and free
I can go anywhere my feet wanted to be
I can travel without paying any extra fee
I can even walk using only my knee

Meet new friends, is what i wish
Then suddenly, I'm playing hi5 with the starfish
I go dancing with some jellyfish
I was taught to swim by the milk fish

In the deep sea, everything is possible
You can meet friends that could lessen your struggle
It's like I'm in underwater jungle
You need to survive in any means that is possible

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 10, 2012 at 6:18 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Melinde. Love, Carol Melinde Guadalupe April 10, 2012 at 8:56 AM Thanks a lot....(<")

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2012 at 6:34 PM very imaginative, Melinde. Congrats on your win. Melinde Guadalupe April 9, 2012 at 4:33 AM Thanks.....(<")

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl April 6, 2012 at 5:09 AM Congratulations Melinda a worthy piece xx Melinde Guadalupe April 7, 2012 at 11:48 PM Thanks.....(<")

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 6, 2012 at 1:39 AM congrats Melinde on a super win for a lovely entry luv.. happy easter blessings too.. Melinde Guadalupe April 7, 2012 at 11:44 PM Thanks...happy easter too...(<")

Gautami Phookan April 5, 2012 at 4:38 PM Quite an interesting work, liked it!!Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting for my contest. love, gautami Melinde Guadalupe April 7, 2012 at 11:42 PM Thank you............. you've been an inspiration.....(<")