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In the Deep Sea

I'm in the secret world of my imagination A place of unique and amazing creation In a place where i can walk in slow motion In the deep sea, yes, that's my location In here I'm independent and free I can go anywhere my feet wanted to be I can travel without paying any extra fee I can even walk using only my knee Meet new friends, is what i wish Then suddenly, I'm playing hi5 with the starfish I go dancing with some jellyfish I was taught to swim by the milk fish In the deep sea, everything is possible You can meet friends that could lessen your struggle It's like I'm in underwater jungle You need to survive in any means that is possible

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Melinde. Love, Carol
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 4/10/2012 8:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot....(<")
Date: 4/6/2012 6:34:00 PM
very imaginative, Melinde. Congrats on your win.
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 4/9/2012 4:33:00 AM
Thanks.....(<")
Date: 4/6/2012 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations Melinda a worthy piece xx
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 4/7/2012 11:48:00 PM
Thanks.....(<")
Date: 4/6/2012 1:39:00 AM
congrats Melinde on a super win for a lovely entry luv.. happy easter blessings too..
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 4/7/2012 11:44:00 PM
Thanks...happy easter too...(<")
Date: 4/5/2012 4:38:00 PM
Quite an interesting work, liked it!!Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting for my contest. love, gautami
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Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 4/7/2012 11:42:00 PM
Thank you............. you've been an inspiration.....(<")

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