In the Days of My Solitary Existence

Im the faceless king,Seated on my throne of doubt,king of my own conspiracies,clothed in 
the shadows of secrecy,playing games with my mind trying to trick my reality,not wanting to 
understand what i know and yet i seem to fully grasp that which i don't know.. Under the 
illusions of my own casting,deep in the eye of my own storm..secrets of my beginning 
revealed to me brought down as crowns upon wingless angels and tears of mothers. The 
treasure that is sought after i do not wish to pertake,but its who i am,who im not and who i 
want to be...maybe i will find peace in the fact that i know you and im soathed by your 
knowledge and understanding..the flicker of light in my darkened tomb that draws me 
towards the light,so that i might bathe in it and peal off the darkness...only maybe,just 
maybe i will linger on hidden for a while.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/8/2010 1:33:00 PM
THANK YOU ANDY,APPRECIATE THE SUPPORT
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Date: 6/7/2010 2:40:00 PM
very well done.rich in imagery and a language that to my mind flows so smoothly
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:17:00 AM
thank you for the support,but i was wondering how i can get more exposure for my writing and some constructive critic on my work,sopport in those areas will be greatly appreciated
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Aaron. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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