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In the Dark of the Strand

Marquees are bright with neon lights, where crowds line up for movie night
Holding hands, we're in 'The Strand'. The velvet carpet guides us in

Popcorn smokes, .. we're drinking cokes,...  and cracking jokes with Bing and Hope
Lamour's along with more sarongs,... , her luscious lips, and cigarettes, 
She fills ashtrays with smoking tips, and tosses guys like poker chips


         'Movietone'  intrudes with news, and soon we're in somber mood
         Third-Reich goosesteps  march again,  ... an evil presence in the wind...


Cary Grant , (a news reporter),  loves his girl, and his typewriter
"His Girl Friday", plot is witty, sometimes crazy.  But Cary loves this ditzy lady.... 

William Powell and Mryna Loy..., Asta barks, and finds a toy, ...a ploy? a clue?,....
...an earring gold.  The mystery is clearly solved.--  A crimson sun, is rising cold!


        Movietone in black and white,... graphic scenes, where soldiers die


Another night, suspense on chart.  'Correspondent' ,  Joel McCrea. 
Saves Lorraine, and claims the Day.  BUY WAR BONDs !! They'll pave the way

Bogart, Bergman bring to light, a valiant flght , within their grasp
Airline ticket, in her hand, they must part, and do what's right, no questions asked

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          It's movie night, but you aren't here, a troopship took you far from here
           Allied troops are moving tanks.  I wait for you..God give me strength




       I'm in the Strand, within the dark,  there's no one here to hold my hand

       I'm all alone...........I heard the news....................You left it all in Anzio




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For Contest Chopped III Sponsored by Craig Cornish
11/23/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Fantastic, congratulations. I wrote one called Slump, it was a fun contest to write for. This is very effective.
Larimore Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 9:07 PM
How incredible. A win well deserved!
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 11:00 PM
CARRIE, congratulations in Craigs C., chopped contest.... LUV LINDA
Jerden Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 4:42 PM
So many familiar images here... I also was intrigued by a film noir possibility, but got stuck in a private detective parody loop, so switched themes. You got a lot in for 20 lines. Seemed longer, somehow.Congratulations!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Very creative write Carrie! Congrats on top place win!
Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Way to go with a winning work..Congrats ...May your Christmas be the brightest ever..Sara
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 2:50 AM
Great Carrie Love- rajat
Yvonne Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win.
Yvonne Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Great movies, very creative, love your take on this challenge. A Fav!
Mohn Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Wonderfully written Carrie...big congrats on your win
Allison Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 3:40 PM
such an impressive write Carrie many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on your top win Carrie and I hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
Haight Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Wow...Carrie, what an impressive poem and how well you wove the supplied facts in! We used to have a Strand movie theater in our city. I do remember the days when the only place we could see the news in motion was in the movie theater. A big congratulations on your First Place win! 7+Fav, Sandra
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 1:45 PM
congratulations Carrie on your top win well deserved
Carmack Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 12:05 PM
Congrats on taking first.
Kayode Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Merry Christmas and congrats on the win Carrie...huggs
May Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 7:41 PM
Brilliant write ..I love the use of the movies and movie stars...
Strand Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 2:14 AM
Very nostalgic piece Carrie(well for some of us oldies at any rate) Thanks for your friendship and poetic support for my youtube endeavours etc.Have a blessed thanksgiving and Christmas.rgds Brian
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:38 PM
'Saves Lorraine, and claims the Day', lines like this one are so cleverly woven into your poem. Casablanca's earnest endeavor to spur on the fighting spirit. Wow, this poem is so impressive Carrie. I wish I could write this divinely! A #7 and going straight into my fav's!
Ellison Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 3:40 PM
WOW! This was my era! You brought back a time before colossal "shoot 'em up" science fiction block busters! A more passionate time, a time of war in the history of the movies! Really enjoyed it Carrie!
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