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In The Cycle of Existence

First Place

Poetry Contest by Anoucheka Gangsbisoon

 

In The Cycle of Existence

    Big Bang exploded in void Cosmos.
    Instant happenstance of Start
    of Space -Matter- Time 
    from compressed Energy
    initiating Cycle of Existence.

    Life somehow sprouted from non living sources
     resulting versatilities in Nature.
     Soul staying in slumber state
     was ignited in the cycle of existence.

    Dormant consciousness hidden in soul
     starts in womb through birth
     termed as ‘Life’.
     ‘Life’ continues to run till ‘Death’
      transcending to ‘After -Life’ phase
      and streaming in cycle of existence
      obeying conservation of energy.

      Each soul is framed to
       fit somewhere in cycle of existence 
       within closed contour 
       of Pre - Present - After Life :
       Subject to Evolution,
      
       Energy -Space - Matter - Time
       Life - Consciousness- Soul :
       Each rolling rippling
       in the Cycle of Existence.
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Kerr Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your richly deserved first place selection. Your entry is concise, creative, informative with a highly original slant on contest theme. Howard
Alex Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 4:18 AM
" starts in womb through birth termed as ‘Life’. ‘Life’ continues to run till ‘Death’ transcending to ‘After -Life’ phase" - The Cycle of Existence is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 7:39 PM
I like your summary especially leading into afterlife!
Dutta Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 1:19 AM
Thanks for your visit . Blessings
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