In the Country

Why

Had

He come

Here? For peace?

Solace? He began

To realize there wasn't the

Perfect quiet around that he would have expected—

Out in the country. Plenty of disturbances here and there, a shaking of the dry

Autumn leaves that wasn't wind, the racket—some unseen birds chastising him. You thought you'd enter a fresh block of air. Instead, what did you get? 

What are you doing here? where are you going? A sense of being watched by things—things you
 
Did not know about. Of being a disturbance. Life—

Around—coming to some conclu-

Sion about you from

Vantage points

You could

Not

See.
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Amadore Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 7:10 PM
Interesting thought process...I liked the end product.
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