In the Cool of Spring

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I have mixed feelings about rain, but I like it when its so light I don't get wet:-)

in the cool of spring i stepped out in the drizzle such sweet surrender Date written and posted:05/22/2018

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Date: 5/22/2018 2:51:00 PM

I can feel the atmosphere you describe. Well written and good description. Beverly Read

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/22/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you very much, Beverly!

Date: 5/22/2018 2:37:00 PM

- You describe it soft ... but I do not like rain ... we have too much - A great haiku, Edward - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/22/2018 2:50:00 PM

Many thanks, Anne-Lise! Soft, the only way I like it, lol. I'm sure people living in Seattle echo your sentiments!