Notes About The Poem

I have mixed feelings about rain, but I like it when its so light I don't get wet:-)

In the Cool of Spring

in the cool of spring
                           i stepped out in the drizzle
                                such sweet surrender



Date written and posted:05/22/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May 22, 2018 at 2:51 PM
I can feel the atmosphere you describe. Well written and good description. Beverly Read
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May 22, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Thank you very much, Beverly!
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May 22, 2018 at 2:37 PM
- You describe it soft ... but I do not like rain ... we have too much - A great haiku, Edward - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 22, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise! Soft, the only way I like it, lol. I'm sure people living in Seattle echo your sentiments!
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