Barbara Gorelick Poet Verse

In the Clouds

watching
the clouds drift pass
a dream

dreaming
of unicorns
and you

your face
in a white sea
drifting

adrift
in yesterday
our time

timeless
those rose filled days
sun kissed..


Musetle Train..for Richard's contest.

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Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:03 PM good win...PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 9, 2015 at 9:54 PM I love your nostalgic poem, Barbara. It has such a carefree, dreamy feel...congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda

Barbara Gorelick January 9, 2015 at 6:17 PM Thank you for your support..Means a great deal to me..Havent been havingmuch success lately. Barbara Barbara Gorelick January 9, 2015 at 6:19 PM oops

Kayod5 Kayode January 5, 2015 at 11:52 PM Congrats on the win Barbara...huggs

Paul Callus January 5, 2015 at 4:57 PM I love clouds...as long as they are friendly ones...they have given me many sweet dreams! Congrats on a lovely win, Barbara! // paul Barbara Gorelick January 6, 2015 at 12:24 PM Thanks Paul..I sponsored a contest once on clouds..I got some great poems..that was way back when..lol Barbara

Jan Allison January 5, 2015 at 4:07 PM I'd love to be n this dreamy train - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2015 at 3:45 PM In re-reading this one I was wondering why I didn't post it higher. It is really very good. I think what threw me off was the second line. Consider changing pass to by or past. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering. Barbara Gorelick January 6, 2015 at 12:23 PM Your right! It was a typo that I didn't catch until you just brought it up. Im brain dead.. Thanks... Barbara

James W Johnson December 28, 2014 at 4:49 AM Lovely musetle train... warm, alluring. I really liked the third refrain: you face in a white sea drifting. I imagery is astounding. Thanks for sharing... j Barbara Gorelick December 28, 2014 at 11:01 AM Hello James, thanks for stopping by..When I can I will visit your work! BArbara

Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 10:08 PM Oh he will love this...so nice to hear from you...too...you did a good job on this...looks like fun..maybe I'll try one..hope all is well..:-) :-)

Tim Smith December 2, 2014 at 10:31 PM Love this BG....hugs Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 2, 2014 at 9:52 PM Wow really beautiful Barbara! Clouds hv always fascinated me! gl in contest!

Brenda Meier-Hans December 2, 2014 at 3:44 PM Really nice Barbara. I love looking at clouds and dreaming. Congratulations on your win.

Aiyah Torres December 2, 2014 at 3:33 PM You did a great job, Barbara! This one is for a sure win :)