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In the Clouds

If thorns sometimes condense

In the cloud- so thick

In chest sprouts a balmy breeze







July 29, 2014  10.55pm



Seventh Place
Contest: One Solo Epic Senryu/Haiku-In The Clouds
Judged: 8/24/14
Sponsor: My All Time Fave Poet, PD

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Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2014 at 5:37 PM

Nice seeing this one again. Congrats on a great win, dear.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 26, 2014 at 2:34 PM

Hi Leonora, congratulations on a well-deserved top placement in this contest! Enjoyed reading this excelleny Senryu! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 25, 2014 at 5:16 AM

Great senryu with good images, Leo. congrats on the win

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 8:24 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Ram. Biggest hugs!

Tim Smith

August 24, 2014 at 6:59 PM

Congrats Leonora..... Hugs Tim

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 8:25 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Rim. Biggest hugs back at ya.

Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 3:39 PM

Hello SIS, thank you for the nice and wonderful comemnt.... Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever, your sis and bff... linda

Len Gasun

August 26, 2014 at 8:28 AM

Hi my dearest sis! You're much welcome. I am so thankful to you as well for the honor and win and for appreciating my poem in your contest. Thank you, thank you so much again. I enjoyed thoroughly your wonderful contest. Biggest hugs at you with kisses!

Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 11:48 AM

Hello Sweet sis, Leo, thank you for the win...:) How are you, and how have you been... Stopping by to say thanks for everything, forever your sis and BFF>.. Linda

Len Gasun

August 24, 2014 at 1:23 PM

Hi, my loving sis! I'm so happy to hear from you. Thank you so much for stopping by. Welcome for the win. You really deserved it! So sorry i was so busy this past weeks and in tandem with my internet trouble. Still no free wifi in our building so i'm subscribing in my own monthly. I'm signing off now, it's already morning here & am goin to schl later. talk to u soon. God bless.

Poet Destroyer A

August 18, 2014 at 8:06 PM

Hi, Leonora, I'm still missing you.. :(... Nothing has changed over here.. :(..Love you, my BFF...Linda

Len Gasun

August 24, 2014 at 1:17 PM

Hi, my dearest sis! So sorry for the late reply here. My monthly internet subscription just arrived a while ago. Thank you soooo much!

Poet Destroyer A

August 6, 2014 at 10:45 PM

MISS YOU, STILL IN THE SAME SITUATION...:(

Len Gasun

August 8, 2014 at 11:13 AM

I miss u too my dearest sis! I'm deeply sorry for all of what you're goin through. I want to cheer u up my dearest sis. Sending u smiles, hugs & kisses. Talk to u soon. God bless! lovem4everLeonora

Ravi Sathasivam

August 4, 2014 at 1:25 AM

Excellent. Very unusual Senryu. Enjoyed. Tfs

Len Gasun

August 5, 2014 at 12:26 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Ravi. Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

August 2, 2014 at 1:00 AM

I'm doing ok, Leonora, I am not sure you have any new poems I have not seen. It was sure great to see your latest posts recently. I sure hope all is going great for you, sweet lady!

Len Gasun

August 5, 2014 at 12:25 PM

Thank u so much again for your precious time stopping by my very dear friend Andrea. I'm doin good my dear friend despite the relentless pressures ;))) tytysm. Many hugs! God bless and take care!

Nette Onclaud

July 30, 2014 at 10:53 AM

hello lors, this is something totally innovative; enjoyed it a lot.. how are you?.. still on curfew?.. take care dear friend.. hugggs

Len Gasun

August 1, 2014 at 6:28 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Nette. I think no more curfew hours here. I seldom go out lately because of my tight schedule here in school. How about you? How's the weather there? Hope no more typhoon coming. I keep you all in my prayers. Many hugs! God bless.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 30, 2014 at 4:25 AM

How unique this poem is with all your charms. Sounds like some welcome rain is about to burst forth! So wonderful reading your poetry again. Blessings

Len Gasun

August 1, 2014 at 6:22 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Connie. This poem is very timely for a cloudy day and occasional rain here. God bless you. I'll visit your poetry soon. Many hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

July 29, 2014 at 5:49 PM

Love the idea of that balmy breeze, sweetie. I really need it on some of these hot Utah days.

Len Gasun

August 1, 2014 at 6:19 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Andrea. It's summer now at Utah right? Ok, tcare and God bless. I'll be around for a while here before doin my homework/paperworks for our sat. class tom. Hope & pray that you're doin well always. I'll visit you soon ok. Many hugs! God bless!

Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 2:58 PM

Hello SIS, I'm only peeking in.... To say hi again. How are you, my dearest poetry sis? I will be here for another hour or so... Say hi if you are still here.. love ya, your BFF..PD

Len Gasun

August 1, 2014 at 6:14 AM

Take care always my dearest poet sis-BFF. I'll go around here for a while before i proceed to my homework for tomorrow/ sat.class. God bless. Thank u so much again & i'm always honored and glad to hear from you. God bless.

Len Gasun

August 1, 2014 at 6:11 AM

Hi my loving sis-BFF! Again, sorry if my reply comes only now. I didn't stay long the other night & i think I was already logged off when you dropped by. By d way, how are you? I keep u always in my prayers & thoughts although I'm super busy here. Hope everythin will gonna b fine soon. I'm always here for u my dearest sis, just message me, ok. Sending u hugs & kisses. lovem4evrLeonora

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