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In the Breeze

He hid the pain she'd feel, when their eyes met blind him remaining dumb, while she was tone deaf unable to hear what's being said and really going on. Things moved so fast, she couldn't focus on the motion, only on the feelings that held her off balance swaying back and forth, up and down, around. Dizzy in confusion reaching for a hand that does not exist, the ground cracks to swallow her whole, she cries...afraid, unable to get off the ride, she swings in the breeze alone, the play ground was now closed.

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