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In the Blink of An Eye

I blinked and rubbed my eyes, then looked around. I wondered was I going crazy (like, my aunt who lived in caverns underground...) but no, the boy was riding on the bike. One moment he was there - and now he's gone! I know I wasn't dreaming; he was real. It took a while for me to cotton on; I can't describe the way that makes me feel: I saw a ghost! I know you won't believe my story, but I swear to God it's true. No joke! I have no reason to deceive. Once sceptic, now I've changed my point of view. written 25th February for Carolyn's Vanishing contest

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Date: 3/7/2021 1:21:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. That would be scary if something like that could happen. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2021 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations Jack, incredible poetry.
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Date: 3/2/2021 3:04:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest with this excellent poem _Constance
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Date: 3/1/2021 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win - ghosts come and go - so of course I believe you! A great poem - David Holmes
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Date: 3/1/2021 11:23:00 AM
Your "underground" aunt gave me a laugh, Jack, but you know I would believe you if you told me you saw a ghost. Well done, my friend. Congratulations on a second place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2021 10:49:00 AM
Oh I believe that ghosts do visit - hope this one is a win Jack, good luck, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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