In the Belly of the Beast

When I was a young man, 
I was swallowed by a whale.
Like Jonah I found myself 
in the belly of the Beast
and I too called out to God 
from its deep, deep
and infinite blackness...
and God released me 
and I found myself back 
in my body on the shore.

For a long, long, long time 
that dark whale followed me.
I was never safe-- 
not even on dry land for that beast 
could go anywhere, and only the Light-- 
an unique and wondrous brilliance 
not of this world-- 
could clothe my naked soul and 
keep that death-shrouded beast at bay....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Calasibetta Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your inspirational poem! Blessings, Paulette
Carber Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Paulette, and God bless!
Agustin Avatar
October 22, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, exposing your faith in your awesome poetic style.
Carber Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Beata--go with God always...
Alex Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:53 AM
It's a beautiful (if not real) symbolic work. Great writing. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Thanks, but alas, it's more real than I like to remember--I'm one counting on grace...
Marc Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 6:07 PM
There are hidden truths behind these stories. Profoundly beautiful.
Carber Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Thank you, very much appreciated!
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:17 AM
- One year later .... Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Devonshire Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:06 AM
A spiritually uplifting poem, L.J. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Carber Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:03 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Thanks Sunshine, much appreciated!
One Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 4:01 PM
interesting take and use of metaphor.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Kitchin Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem.
Carber Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Tania, much appreciated!
Devonshire Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 4:33 PM
The way the whale represented adversity carried through life really got to me, L.J. Like you, I find hope through faith. Beautifully written! Congratulations on your win. There were many wonderful entries to this contest and nearly all of them were difficult to rank. Best wishes, Carolyn
Carber Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Carolyn for the honor-- I don't envy you as a judge--it's like picking your favorite flavor of ice cream when you love almost every flavor!
One Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 8:40 AM
Creative take on the contest LJ.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Carber Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Silent One-- I am very much honored!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! xomo
Carber Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Thank you Maureen, I'm very much honored!
Barden Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 11:45 PM
Best wishes and sincere congratulations for your win in Maureen's contest, LJ - keep up the great work, and I hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday season! :-)
Carber Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Thanks my friend, and may yours be joyful as well!
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Love your poem, LJ. Congrats on your win.
Carber Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Line
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