Rob Carmack Poet Narrative

In the Auditorium Part Ii

In the Auditorium de la Panacée, 
not yet perfume or pheromone, 
but only what he can see,
drawn exit as she heads home.

Every step on pulse of Montpellier,
one dropped program chances today.
Prudent for an approach easier,
when she stops at a Café.

Took a sip and tripped closer,
now pierced by what he can’t see.
Courtesy of Swiss industry and a photographer
in the Auditorium de la Panacée.

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A collaboration with Julia Ward who composed Part I which can be found on her list.

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Joan Donnelly Ellis October 28, 2015 at 7:20 AM Good job

Nette Onclaud August 25, 2015 at 12:34 AM enjoyed your whimsical work, rob... greeat job!,, huggs

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2015 at 3:20 PM hmmm, a little mystery at the end there. This seems to be a guy trying to meet a woman? Wonderful job collaborating with Julia! Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2015 at 7:49 PM Yes, I realize it was a woman already seen, Julia. At the time I read it, I did not know her name was Maria! Julia Ward August 24, 2015 at 11:49 PM He is trying to catch up with a woman already seen. My poem in Part I introduces you to the woman in question, called Maria, so there is no mystery, Andrea! (That poem in Part I was my idea and was written before our decision to collaborate.)

Julia Ward August 24, 2015 at 3:51 AM An excellent follow-up to mine! A happy 7 is accorded. Hugs, Julia