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In the Asterlife

“in the asterlife”


as the corn
was knee-high 
on the 4th of July

it came 
to pass on
Michaelmas

ducks 
did swim
thus on this

Christmas
they’ll
slide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/13/2023 4:30:00 PM
Now I get the title.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/13/2023 4:55:00 PM
;)
Date: 10/13/2023 6:20:00 AM
On frozen pond. Sharp mind, Jeff.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/13/2023 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Lin, but just rewording some old sayings

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