In the Asterlife

“in the asterlife”


as the corn
was knee-high 
on the 4th of July

it came 
to pass on
Michaelmas

ducks 
did swim
thus on this

Christmas
they’ll
slide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Situation Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 4:30 PM
Now I get the title.
Connelly Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 4:55 PM
;)
Lane Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 6:20 AM
On frozen pond. Sharp mind, Jeff.
Connelly Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Thanks Lin, but just rewording some old sayings
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