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poem submitted to "Zodiac Signs as Inspiration" poetry contest, Nette Onclaud, sponsor, 7/6/2026

In the Aquarium

When I leaned over the aquarium, the water shifted~
a small blue fish rising as if to greet the surface.

Its fins flickered like tiny pennants,
sending ripples through the glass world
where everything moved
with the calm certainty of stars.

For a moment it hovered beneath the surface, 
a bright thought I hadn’t yet had~
then vanished into the quiet drift
of its own deep sky.
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "In the Aquarium" write. Colorful Picture.... Have a blessed day with your win..........
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 8:51 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your contest win with this excellent poem, Sara.
Delegans Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 9:45 PM
Well-written, Sara. This takes me right there. It's if I am watching this play out in front of me.
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