Nancy Jones Poet Free verse

In the Air Is It Thinly ---Question Mark

Vibrations quiver in smoke-filled
volcanoes or parlors not much
difference.

You suck mine, I'll suck yours
both of us feelin'
for stuff that don't suck.

The difference between a fist and a
palm.. umm..
why is that not “duh!!”?

Mysteries, histories
and so on...

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John Smith December 8, 2011 at 6:32 AM Never entirely sure what you say, but I love it. I think 'KAPOW' is the fist; 'smack', the palm. That's what they sound like on me. I can't remember what 'suck' sounds like.

M.I.A . December 7, 2011 at 9:23 PM I'm trying to find words to say for this piece yet i can't find it. left me dumbfounded Nancy, it's the: Mysteries, histories and so on... ^.~