In the Air

Life flies over me
I tend to notice the air
Green, blue, and yellow
Grown beyond the scenery
I live freely and at peace

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 9:48 AM
"I live freely and at peace" Best way to live Russell when one lives from the heart this peace is possible. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:50 PM
oh, I saw this just the other day Well, CONGRATULATIONS on your deserved win!!
Quigley Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Russell
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Russell. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:51 PM
Russell congrats on your win..David
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December 7, 2011 at 12:14 AM
Russell, hi! a very lovley thought... in the air... how else could you fly freely..~ENJOYED.. thank you for sharing your wonderful tanka ;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d.
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December 6, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Very creative way to write of nature, my friend.
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