In the Air

I would strip and forever erase the armour of my soul and place the naked and 
fragile remains of all that I am in your trust to hold and keep safe, and in return I 
ask for a two second lock of eyes. I would feel as though I had just negotiated 
history's most gratifying deal, my thoughts as I write this have searched and 
received your spent static; my skin is stretching alive with goose bumps as though 
your touch is imminent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 11:53 PM
the words you have written show you would do anything for the love in your life. Passionate and full of emotion. nice job
Babcock Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Very beautiful words on this write. Good one. Phyl
Anderson Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Very nice...Jimmy
Hales Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 4:51 AM
enjoyed your write sarah x
Miles Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 7:12 PM
This is an amazing write! It gave me goosebumps..
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