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In the Air

I would strip and forever erase the armour of my soul and place the naked and fragile remains of all that I am in your trust to hold and keep safe, and in return I ask for a two second lock of eyes. I would feel as though I had just negotiated history's most gratifying deal, my thoughts as I write this have searched and received your spent static; my skin is stretching alive with goose bumps as though your touch is imminent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/19/2013 11:53:00 PM
the words you have written show you would do anything for the love in your life. Passionate and full of emotion. nice job
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Date: 3/3/2011 5:09:00 PM
Very beautiful words on this write. Good one. Phyl
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Date: 3/2/2011 7:31:00 AM
Very nice...Jimmy
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:51:00 AM
enjoyed your write sarah x
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Date: 3/1/2011 7:12:00 PM
This is an amazing write! It gave me goosebumps..
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