Notes About The Poem

In the Afternoon Sun

kitty
s t r e t c h e s
lazily



P.S. A  brevette poem is formed by using three words: the subject (noun), a verb, a noun or adjective, in this exact order. The verb should show an ongoing action. This is done by spacing out the letters in the verb. Each of the three words may have any number of syllables, but it is desirable that the poem have balance in the choice of these words.



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Messina Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 4:57 AM
Lovely poem, Line. As Caren mentioned...these little poems can be quite difficult. Nice to see you...Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 3:41 PM
Thank you very much, Charles ~
Krutsinger Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 12:42 PM
I enjoyed this. Some of the most difficult poems have three words.
Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 3:18 PM
Thanks, Caren ~
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