In the Aftermath of Love and Tragedy: Heloise and Abelard

"Then there is no more left but this, that in our doom the sorrow yet to come shall be no less than the love we two have already known" (Words of Heloise to Abelard after her pregnancy) Like moon on nights of skies un-starred she lived without her Abelard. A parched still plain was Heloise - like moon on nights of skies un-starred. In death she would not lose regard for him who’d been her rain and breeze. Like moon on nights of skies un-starred, she lived without her Abelard. When Abelard put love away, with Church he mightily aligned. The world was not like ours today when Abelard put love away. Not even Heloise could say were she to often cross his mind. When Abelard put love away, with Church he mightily aligned. By Andrea Dietrich For the Famous Couples/DuosPoetry Contest of Heather Ober (based on one of the most interesting love stories I have ever read: Abelard & Heloise)
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April 15, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Andrea, Congratulations with your winning poem in Heather's "Famous Couples/Duos" contest. ~Always* Linda
Arowolo Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 4:21 PM
Beautiful piece,Nice presentation,Andrea...Great job...Congrats on your superb and well deserved win in this contest..Kudos to you....
Minardi Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 1:32 AM
this is amazing and makes me want to read more about them. congratulations on the big win , Andrea :)
Puddifoot Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 5:11 PM
hi andrea, I was saving the best til last to come here and congratulate you, honoured to share the top spot with you, my friend :)
Guzzi Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:20 PM
Interesting makes me want to know more ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Sefunmi Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 12:44 PM
Congrats on your win! I enjoyed reading this poem as well as your A-Z poem. You are a rare talent. I have missed the soup so much, especially you and other great poets here.
Mannan Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 10:46 PM
This is indeed a winner. Many congrats dear friend for this win.
Jerden Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 1:08 PM
Great couple to choose Andrea! And great job, as always! Congratulations!
Seal Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Andrea. Well done. Take care Richard
Oyewole Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 5:00 AM
Congratulations on your star win Andrea. How can you help me with the book my lady? You deserve it~ A.O
Nair Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 2:13 AM
Andrea, Congrats on this superb win:) Jag
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Congrats on top spot Andrea! Well done.
May Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 6:51 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea
Martin Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Beautiful and lush write with some very passionate rhyming, Andrea. Congratulations. ~Jeremy
Taylor Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 3:35 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Ryerson Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Never heard of them but I sure will look them up...Eloquent and classy Triolet as usual from you my friend - Tim
Bacha Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Congratulation Andrea, loved reading it. I just love the way you write your poetry, so deep, and beautiful. I feel as if i am watching a movie. Love Terry a 7>>>
Richards Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Looks as if we both picked tragic love stories.......I loved your selection, Andrea....and thrilled to be in your company here! Congrats!
Jones Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations Andrea...you make me want to read this...Donna
Crud Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your win, and IMHO well deserved. thank you for sharing. warmly, x, eph.
Hendricks Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Andrea. Impeccable writing, my friend :)
Liwayway Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 12:58 PM
superb write my friend Andrea thou it sad!! clap! clap! clap! Big congratulations on your grand win...consecutive wins from one of the great poet on PS. cheers!! (^__^)
Hunter Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 11:01 AM
Wow. Wow. Wow. That's three wows, Andrea. Congrats!
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 10:19 AM
Andrea this is stupendous. Well worthy of top honors. Congratultions. Love, joyce
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 10, 2013 at 10:00 AM
oh my aching fingers, more congrats love and well deserved xx
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