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In the Absence of Complication

In the absence of complication, trials and tribulations become distant memories. Above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes - inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind. Orange-gold trickles from those sapphire skies alight on my warm freckled skin. I bask in saffron deliciousness, mind-lapping this moment of utter simplicity. Inside the mindfulness of my chrysalis, I relish a metamorphosis to new-found freedom’s sweetness which flits away agony and woes on butterfly wings. Did I release the pain, or did the pain release me? It matters not; I stay quiet writing - for now – a blissful sunflower following the sun Nov. 22, 2019 for 'Your Best New Poem' Poetry Contest of Emile Pinet First four lines were inspired by Silent One's contest

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Date: 12/29/2019 8:37:00 AM
Can't wait for you to try out those new wings.....nicely done Andrea
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Date: 12/28/2019 10:04:00 AM
I'm glad I inspired you... Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/2/2019 7:34:00 AM
Lovely write..Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 12/2/2019 2:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2019 4:28:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I enjoyed your choice of words and how you used them. You are an amazing writer my friend. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/1/2019 3:58:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Andrea
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Date: 12/1/2019 3:48:00 PM
nice choice of words .... i saw the fragility of words in your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 11/23/2019 5:46:00 PM
Great imagery. Peace, serenity, and knowing that God is in command.
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Date: 11/23/2019 9:16:00 AM
I wonder what the next transformation will reveal. Through your writing you have transformed many times. A poet is a wondrous creature. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/23/2019 9:07:00 AM
Peace be still, and know that I am God. Kind of sums up your poem here Andrea. You know me, this is right up my present alley. :) I'm glad you're soaking up some inner peace. <3 :)
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Date: 11/22/2019 11:32:00 PM
This is gorgeous. I love it and know it's a sure winner. Wonderful. Bless you dear friend, Gina
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Date: 11/22/2019 8:02:00 PM
Oh wow, the mood that wrote this, takes one to another sphere, yet the same dimension, maybe in absence of worldly things...the poem is amazing. to my fav''''
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Date: 11/22/2019 2:20:00 PM
I like this Andrea. The poem is a warm spring day, a warming sense of hope.
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Date: 11/22/2019 10:48:00 AM
You delivered the message succinctly, Andrea--I enjoyed the read. All the best.
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Date: 11/22/2019 10:37:00 AM
You completed this poem beautifully Andrea, I think S.O.will.be impressed because I was. Tom.
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