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I was inspired by my own contest.

In the absence of complication, trials and tribulations become distant memories. Above sapphire skies delight sanguine eyes - inspiring forthcoming musings of the mind. Words flow like rivers kissing mouths of the sea, where an aubade of dawn creates waves of serenity. In the purity of silence, I hear the heartbeat of nature, a tranquil symphonic percussion of harmonic breaths. A veneer of coolness refreshes my sensitive skin, as my persona resembles a semblance of peace. Positive thoughts create a carnival of colours, as neon crayons illuminate the canvas of my life. I am content in being lost in ripples of Earth's lullabies, as life is a balance between rainy days and sunny horizons. Today, footfalls of autumn acorns annoy like wayward winter winds, but I know tomorrow, lavender spring air will bring rows of tulips.

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Date: 5/4/2022 2:40:00 AM
Love this poem life would definitely be easier without the complications and if a person can only focus on the lullabies of the earth and the lavender spring air life would be so peaceful.
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Date: 11/23/2019 9:06:00 AM
Brilliant, SO, hats off to you:) I will not try this contest, as I am not good at free verse...
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2019 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Jo...Free verse is just a poem without regular rhyme :)
Date: 11/22/2019 5:50:00 PM
I just read this poem.........I am awestruck! I am stunned by its poignancy, I am content! Lonna
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2019 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Lonna..
Date: 11/20/2019 8:11:00 AM
Wow! I can't come close to this. I may try anyway, This is lovely--vividly descriptive, S.O. Favorite line--14. Janice
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 11/18/2019 6:38:00 PM
You should enter it. I could be a guest judge. ;0)
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2019 5:06:00 PM
I'm happy with an NA thanks Richard..
Date: 11/18/2019 3:41:00 PM
you outdid yourself using your very own contest theme. Very well done!
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Silent One
Date: 11/23/2019 5:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 11/18/2019 10:37:00 AM
Your poetic skills and talent are awesome, as well as awe inspiring, such brilliant work - this is a gem of note, improving on it is almost impossible - a pulsating write, a true creative poetic masterpiece , so well penned Silent one. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 11/18/2019 2:30:00 PM
Thank you for the great feedback..
Date: 11/17/2019 5:35:00 PM
Wow! How do you do it?
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 5:36:00 PM
Do what? :)
Date: 11/16/2019 10:51:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem! I'm looking forward to seeing where other minds wander with these first four lines.
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:07:00 AM
You should give it a try... Thanks Juliet.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/16/2019 10:54:00 PM
This is a fav for me!
Date: 11/16/2019 10:40:00 PM
Your words always hold such meaning and depth. Beautiful images that touch the heart, in some way. Once again, you have created Masterpiece, my dear friend. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Brandy...
Date: 11/16/2019 10:05:00 PM
There are so many beautiful lines in this poem, I can see that you have been inspired by nature to write them. Moving in unison you resonate with it. The beauty of Nature is all around, if only some would appreciate the serenity and peace it brings with it. A wonderful example for your contest Si, one for my fave list....Maria Hugs
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Maria..
Date: 11/16/2019 10:04:00 PM
This is a beautifully flowing piece that offers immense peace to the reader. I appreciate what you have offered here. Thank you, Silent One ~
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:08:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/16/2019 9:52:00 PM
"The heartbeat of nature beats o the symphony of dawn" Well written Silent..
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:10:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 11/16/2019 9:28:00 PM
Love those final two lines!
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:10:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 11/16/2019 5:45:00 PM
This is one of the most perfectly beautiful poems I've read in quite a while. I haven't read about the contest but strongly suspect surpassing this gem would required stealing a jewel from a high security museum. Impressive work - a treat. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thank you CayCay, that is a great compliment...
Date: 11/16/2019 2:36:00 PM
your words always flow with such pulse, like the ocean in hypnotic tones...they allure and amaze time after time... how can one even compete with this beautiful masterpiece you have given as an example...wow... i am in awe again, superb penning! hugs
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and feedback..
Date: 11/16/2019 1:22:00 PM
Rivers kissing the mouths of the sea, classic line, this was simply beautiful, great example for your contest. Truly hard to beat!
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you John..
Date: 11/16/2019 11:32:00 AM
Hi Silent isnt it weird how life is. Sometimes when we are trying to help others we end up helping ourselves. Well put in this poem. A true winner in my eyes. Congrats * hands Silent trophy * Thanks for sharing this
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Gregory..
Date: 11/16/2019 11:24:00 AM
Wow! Silent, This is a top notch example for your contest. You have a way with words and you know to use them. The content, rhymes, rhythm and imagery is superb! You are so talented my friend. I found it to be a poetic masterpiece. Excellent job. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Alexis..
Date: 11/16/2019 11:07:00 AM
Nature stretches its Light.. the soul breathes out one's delight.. the ink pens what is sweet inside.. soothing lullabies flow into the mind.. So inspiring, both your poetry and music Silent One.. I immensely enjoyed the read.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Besma..
Date: 11/16/2019 9:49:00 AM
Wow!! Such poetic reverie, SO. Your words flow like rivers kissing mouths of the sea, where an aubade of dawn creates waves of serenity. In the purity of silence, I hear the heartbeat of nature. Stunning word tapestry. I always learn new ways to express things after reading your sublime poetry. Ty for your blessed gift of quill wisdom. Meesa alova this poem, Meesa alova it a lot. A truly outstanding work of poetic art. Love and hugs always.
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for the great feedback..
Date: 11/16/2019 9:40:00 AM
You always compose amazing verse S.O. and this is another to add to that list, you set the bar high. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Tom..
Date: 11/16/2019 9:14:00 AM
Lovely imagery, SO. Beautifully penned.
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/16/2019 9:08:00 AM
Words flow like rivers kissing mouths of the sea'. I am amazed at the mixture of simile and personification, and I enjoy the line,'I am content in being lost in ripples of Earth's lullabies,'. I wish I could unveil the name behind the Silent One's voice. I like your style of poems though complex to us the toddlers!
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Date: 11/16/2019 8:52:00 AM
'I am content in being lost in ripples of Earth's lullabies,' I like this line, I enjoyed the mixture of simile and personification in the line,'Words flow like rivers kissing mouths of the sea'. You are superb! I wish I could find the missing name Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Ahyia..
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