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In That Mood

Im in that thinking mood. It's eleven in the afternoon. Laying In my bed in my room, Staring out the window looking at the moon. Thinking of you and assumin,  you are too? Thinking of the last words you said to me couldn't be true? Thinking about the things we use to do. Emotion going crazy like animals in the zoo. Can you please listen boo? I just want to get next to you. A lot of crap we been thru and please don't say we are through. You I really do love and I meant everything above-Mario Perez

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/20/2012 9:17:00 PM
It didn't take me long to write this poem.. Please add me on Facebook zerep_oiram@yahoo.com And thanks
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:54:00 PM
Mario, great poem...indeed... nice flow... i like the crazy zoo thought....lol... have a nice one..pd
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:21:00 PM
Holy mother of god, how long did it take you to find all of those words that rhyme with "Mood?" Also, what is 11 in the afternoon? 11 is either "not after noon" or "night." I guess it doesn't really matter all that much because I just like to notice silly things like that. It's a very simple poem, but that's a good thing. You got out your feelings in a sweet and sincere way, and I hope she feels the same =).   -KMD
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