Mario Perez Poet Epic

In That Mood

Im in that thinking mood.
It's eleven in the afternoon.
Laying In my bed in my room,
Staring out the window looking 
at the moon.
Thinking of you and assumin, 
you are too?
Thinking of the last words you 
said to me couldn't be true?
Thinking about the things we 
use to do.
Emotion going crazy like 
animals in the zoo.
Can you please listen boo?
I just want to get next to you.
A lot of crap we been thru and 
please don't say we are 
through.
You I really do love and I 
meant everything above-Mario 
Perez

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Mario Perez February 20, 2012 at 9:17 PM It didn't take me long to write this poem.. Please add me on Facebook [email protected] And thanks

Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2012 at 8:54 PM Mario, great poem...indeed... nice flow... i like the crazy zoo thought....lol... have a nice one..pd

Kirby Magee-Dittberner February 20, 2012 at 8:21 PM Holy mother of god, how long did it take you to find all of those words that rhyme with "Mood?" Also, what is 11 in the afternoon? 11 is either "not after noon" or "night." I guess it doesn't really matter all that much because I just like to notice silly things like that. It's a very simple poem, but that's a good thing. You got out your feelings in a sweet and sincere way, and I hope she feels the same =).   -KMD