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Daffodils crave caresses from the sun, yet, April showers must first melt the frost. For, rain announces that spring has begun, as plants sprout, and Winter's covers get tossed. Songbirds start singing on the sunny days of spring as robin redbreasts build their nests. And happily bask in the sun's warm rays while priming and preening their feathered chests. Forests of trees deploy emerald leaves, soaking up sunbeams streaming toward Earth. And with each ray a sprouting plant receives; opportunities grow for life and birth. Nothing in Nature is ever random, sunshine and showers arrive in tandem. (Sonnet) 2/20/2018

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Date: 2/26/2018 1:56:00 PM
I enjoy reading this sonnet, how one line leads to the meter of the next and catches you up. Congratulations on your top win. It is certainly deserving of it.
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Janis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2018 10:25:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Emile. Very charming poem.
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Date: 2/24/2018 11:47:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2018 8:15:00 PM
Ahh, I see you did a sonnet for the contest. A beautiful job you did, Emile. Congrats for the win!
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Date: 2/24/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I love sonnets, they seem to write themselves, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2018 5:26:00 PM
Great last couplet on this one Emile. Congrats on the top spot
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Date: 2/23/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2018 3:19:00 PM
Very nice, Emile. I can see you have a deep love of Nature. Congrats on your 1st place win!!!
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Date: 2/23/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thanks again Carole, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2018 1:51:00 PM
A wonderful winner, Emile. Truly touching. I especially love the finishing couplet. (Teaching teen-agers, as I did for so many years, I appreciate the PROPER use of the word, 'random.') Kudos! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 2/23/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate your wonderful comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2018 9:48:00 AM
Congratulation on your win, Emile, a wonderful nature refreshing poem.. hugs eve
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Date: 2/23/2018 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Eve, by the way I'm loving your book my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2018 8:21:00 AM
EXCELLENT, Emile--esp. the couplet! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 2/23/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Janice, as always your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/20/2018 3:14:00 PM
Gushing love and growth in its simplicity, good stuff Emile;-)
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Date: 2/20/2018 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Keith, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/20/2018 1:58:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Emile :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, as always your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

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