In Sync

She had everything taken away from her Then they stripped her of her pride She lost her friends when most in need No one stood by her side Her haven was to sit by the beach They had left her that mistakenly Not knowing she would recharge So they had failed unknowingly Not succeeding in totally breaking her spirit ‘Cause she would mend and regenerate In sync with the healing heartbeat of the sea She would be back ready to retaliate To take a stand with more resolve It was her mission and her fate AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on November 1, 2018 for contest TELL ME A STORY 2_PICTURE #2 WOMAN ON BEACH sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI

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Hannah Borke

Date: 11/2/2018 7:12:00 AM

You wrote my biography, except I sit by my computer. I will print it and show it to my family, and hang it on my fridge.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2018 9:46:00 AM

Dear Hannah, gather your strength and get back out in the game. Line xx

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/1/2018 10:16:00 PM

I read this and thought, " I have to tell her there's a contest this would fit perfectly with!!!" and then I got to the end and saw that you knew that already :) Best of luck in the contest

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thanks, PS, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 11/1/2018 2:47:00 PM

Had to FAV this right away! It hit very 'close to home' for me... Brilliantly penned, especially LOVE the lines, "‘Cause she would mend and regenerate/ In sync with the healing heartbeat of the sea", gorgeous and so fitting! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/1/2018 6:31:00 PM

Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Rhona.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/1/2018 12:15:00 PM

I have not yet checked out this contest, but what a write! Powerful piece :) my bst to you in the contest! xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/1/2018 12:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Chris Green

Date: 11/1/2018 11:55:00 AM

Really well written with a wonderful story of strength woven through. Best of luck in the contest

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/1/2018 12:58:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris. Most appreciated.