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In Stillness - Hiku

somber stillness

                                        hangs softly

                             gathering scattered memories









    For: Hiku (Disciplined Brevity) Poetry Contest
    Date: 11/19/21
    Sponsor: William Kekaula 
    Syllables: 15 total(4,3,8)

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Krish Radhakrishna Date: 11/29/2021 4:17:00 PM Superb! a winner!! well done! Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/30/2021 3:03:00 PM Thank you Krish for your stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 11/21/2021 2:22:00 AM Nicely done Paulette...Delice Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/21/2021 8:38:00 AM As always, thank you for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

Mike Bayles Date: 11/19/2021 4:28:00 PM Paulette, your hiku is wonderful and true to life. Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/19/2021 4:51:00 PM Thanks Mike....memories are always an inspiration,aren't they? Blessings, Paulette

Anselmo Boles Date: 11/19/2021 3:44:00 PM This tells me that when uncluttered thoughts wander, almost forgotten scenes reappear. Well done P.C.!...ab Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/19/2021 4:05:00 PM Thank you AB~I appreciate you stopping by my page. Blessings, Paulette

Regina Mcintosh Date: 11/19/2021 12:51:00 PM Beautiful - I love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/19/2021 1:51:00 PM Gina, so glad you enjoyed it....I thought it was impactful. Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2021 12:46:00 PM beautiful in its sadness hugs jan xx Login to Reply Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/19/2021 1:50:00 PM Thank you Jan for stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/19/2021 12:06:00 PM Hello Paulette, yes stillness does gathers memories. Hugs. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/20/2021 11:16:00 AM Hello Paulette, you are welcome my fridnd. Blessings. Paulette Calasibetta Date: 11/19/2021 1:49:00 PM Thanks for stopping by ~ Blessings, Paulette