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In Stillness - Hiku

somber stillness hangs softly gathering scattered memories For: Hiku (Disciplined Brevity) Poetry Contest Date: 11/19/21 Sponsor: William Kekaula Syllables: 15 total(4,3,8)

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 11/29/2021 4:17:00 PM

Superb! a winner!! well done!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/30/2021 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Krish for your stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/21/2021 2:22:00 AM

Nicely done Paulette...Delice

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/21/2021 8:38:00 AM

As always, thank you for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

Mike Bayles

Date: 11/19/2021 4:28:00 PM

Paulette, your hiku is wonderful and true to life.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/19/2021 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Mike....memories are always an inspiration,aren't they? Blessings, Paulette

Anselmo Boles

Date: 11/19/2021 3:44:00 PM

This tells me that when uncluttered thoughts wander, almost forgotten scenes reappear. Well done P.C.!...ab

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/19/2021 4:05:00 PM

Thank you AB~I appreciate you stopping by my page. Blessings, Paulette

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/19/2021 12:51:00 PM

Beautiful - I love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/19/2021 1:51:00 PM

Gina, so glad you enjoyed it....I thought it was impactful. Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison

Date: 11/19/2021 12:46:00 PM

beautiful in its sadness hugs jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/19/2021 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Jan for stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/19/2021 12:06:00 PM

Hello Paulette, yes stillness does gathers memories. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/20/2021 11:16:00 AM

Hello Paulette, you are welcome my fridnd. Blessings.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/19/2021 1:49:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by ~ Blessings, Paulette