thriveni c mysore Poet Etheree

In Stars Above

I
Wonder
At patterns
In Stars Above
Asterisms that range
From straight line to horsehead
Traingles, quadrangles, seven sages
Inspiring stories, lores, beliefs
A tracing tool for seekers, searchers
In dark I align with them, light, am lost

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Howard Kerr June 30, 2025 at 8:51 AM thriveni, A composition of immense stature. Impeccable word choices that exude imagery. Your storyline is plausible and carefully crafted. Howard thriveni c mysore June 30, 2025 at 8:32 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit and words. It brings me joy. I am glad you liked it, thank you dear poet.

David Crandall June 29, 2025 at 11:36 AM wonderful - now, I'm remembering how I used to look at the stars and see animal pictures. thriveni c mysore June 30, 2025 at 6:40 AM Yes I too have lost that child-like wonder while gazing at the sky, thank you for your kind visit and words dear friend. thank you.

Susan Ashley June 29, 2025 at 10:34 AM Dear Thriveni, your alignment with the stars is beautiful and wonderfully expressed. Great imagery builds to a fine finale. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan thriveni c mysore June 30, 2025 at 6:40 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear poet. I am glad you liked this write. Thank you for the blessings, means so much to me.