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In Stars Above

I Wonder At patterns In Stars Above Asterisms that range From straight line to horsehead Traingles, quadrangles, seven sages Inspiring stories, lores, beliefs A tracing tool for seekers, searchers In dark I align with them, light, am lost

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/30/2025 8:51:00 AM

thriveni, A composition of immense stature. Impeccable word choices that exude imagery. Your storyline is plausible and carefully crafted. Howard

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/30/2025 8:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and words. It brings me joy. I am glad you liked it, thank you dear poet.

David Crandall

Date: 6/29/2025 11:36:00 AM

wonderful - now, I'm remembering how I used to look at the stars and see animal pictures.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/30/2025 6:40:00 AM

Yes I too have lost that child-like wonder while gazing at the sky, thank you for your kind visit and words dear friend. thank you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/29/2025 10:34:00 AM

Dear Thriveni, your alignment with the stars is beautiful and wonderfully expressed. Great imagery builds to a fine finale. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

thriveni c mysore
Date: 6/30/2025 6:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear poet. I am glad you liked this write. Thank you for the blessings, means so much to me.