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In Silence

In Silence I glimpsed a pink pedal, falling. Its delicate silk body floating in space. Caressed in the arms of the leaves below withered, cradled in love, going home. A concert without sound.

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Date: 8/11/2024 10:37:00 AM
A concert without sound! This is so beautiful and serene! So descriptive how youv painted imagery in such an elegant manner! Pleasure reading this!
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Marlene Young
Date: 8/11/2024 12:51:00 PM
Your words are so kind. Thank you.
Date: 8/5/2024 4:41:00 PM
Beautiful word portrait Marlene. Did you mean petal?
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Marlene Young
Date: 8/5/2024 5:07:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I did mean petal. LOL

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