In Side Friends

I wrote this about my friends on the social web sight
zombie-station.ning.com


In Van Gerren's mind

Tied up tight with twisted twine

Is a dusty old book

If we could just take a look


Then there is our Queenie

What goes on beneath her beanie

I would sure like to know

If she would give us a show


Hidden in Linz thoughts

Is a beat-up wooden box

With secrets to see

Will she give up the key


Deep in Wally brain

Where some tupperware contains

Odds and ends we once knew

Will he let us all view


In the Psyche of our Zora

Is an urn with such an aura

Will she brush off the dust

Then show it to us


Inside Phluffys head

Is a paper bag, that's said

To contain a whole world

May we see it unfurled 


Now in my conscious thinking

There's a glad bag that is stinking

Full of thoughts, thrown away

As you see here today

                         by JTCurtis

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/7/2014 10:40:00 PM
I think in terms like that about my friends and worse when thinking about my enemies. An honorable man has those too, far too many. A great write and well done too!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/8/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I only write about my friends, of course, that could make a few enemies, Lol
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