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In Search of the Peace of Mind

I was sitting in the dark... Just listening to my inner voice... It asked me why always you have to be so nice... I explained being nice is good... It argued others not good to you then why u should... Then I heard the sea waves sound... It was nothing but my thoughts n feelings were messing up around... I found the horizon... Where I was standing silent and all alone... I was trying to reach to myself... I was badly screaming for some help... Then suddenly I got some delight... When I saw the ray of light... It was nothing but my inner peace... Where all dilemmas got seize... This is life sometimes darkness sometimes light... What you have to remember is not to lose your inner peace just hold it tight....

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Date: 1/25/2016 9:34:00 PM
Pratik, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
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Date: 1/24/2016 8:27:00 PM
the imagery's awesome. LINDA
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Pratik Kale
Date: 1/25/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks :D
Date: 1/24/2016 2:56:00 PM
deep write, Pratik.......... SKAT
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Pratik Kale
Date: 1/25/2016 9:15:00 AM
Thanks.. In life sometimes in some situations u get so much connected with some hidden and unknown place in ur mind to create such deep thoughts. I like that unknown place of mind very much.
Date: 1/24/2016 1:03:00 PM
A place to call your own...... A piece to describe that... Is something worth cherishing... Well done, Kale!
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Pratik Kale
Date: 1/25/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thanks

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