In Search of a Room With No Windows

I stand outside
In a parking lot,
Feet crunching
Against the gravel
As I walk toward
The entirely flat,
Empty landscape
Just beyond the lot.
It stretches as far
As my vision can reach,
Just barren, uninhabited earth,
Strange and stark
With no landmarks
Dotting it’s surface. 
In sudden succession,
Hundreds of cyclones
Drop from the clouds
And crash to the ground,
Quickly forming into
Whirling columns of 
dust and debris,
Charging toward me.
I turn and run,
Seeking refuge in the
Building behind me,
Yanking open the door
And proceeding down the hall,
In search of a room
With no windows.
But there aren’t any.
Oversized glass windows
Line the outer walls
Of every room,
Quivering and rattling
As the cyclones near.
I picture exploding glass,
Jagged and fragmented shards 
Flying into the room,
Striking me,
Injuring me,
Crippling me,
But there is nowhere else
To go.
The roar outside
Becomes deafening,
Like a thousand
Freight trains 
Hurtling my way, 
And the floor beneath me
Begins to shake,
Alerting me to my
Impending doom.
I crouch down,
Close my eyes 
And cover my ears, 
Only to awaken
Suddenly in my own bed
To discover it was just a 
Dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/3/2018 1:32:00 AM
You had me from the first line, great write!
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Katie Telling
Date: 9/4/2018 9:48:00 PM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 9/2/2018 12:15:00 PM
Very dynamic, almost as though my tablet was moving in my hands as I read it. Excellent work.
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Katie Telling
Date: 9/4/2018 9:48:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words!!
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