Edward Ibeh Poet Choka

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In Saturday State of Mind

Looking at the world
    Like a child so excited
 In Saturday state of mind

       Hustle and bustle
I'm watching going past me
A wondrous, promising day


Date written and posted: 07/28/2018

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Paris-Maree Boreham July 28, 2018 at 7:17 AM Hello Edward Ibeh, good write ! By reading this I assume a "Choka" is a bit like a chapter hook as I would now like to read the other days of the week-state of mind =D Edward Ibeh July 28, 2018 at 7:28 AM Thank you so much, Paris-Maree! You've given me food for thought to chew on!:-)

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2018 at 6:09 AM Nice! Edward Ibeh July 28, 2018 at 6:12 AM Greetings, Kim!:-) Glad you liked it!