In Saturday State of Mind

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Looking at the world Like a child so excited In Saturday state of mind Hustle and bustle I'm watching going past me A wondrous, promising day Date written and posted: 07/28/2018

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Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 7/28/2018 7:17:00 AM

Hello Edward Ibeh, good write ! By reading this I assume a "Choka" is a bit like a chapter hook as I would now like to read the other days of the week-state of mind =D

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2018 7:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paris-Maree! You've given me food for thought to chew on!:-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2018 6:09:00 AM

Nice!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2018 6:12:00 AM

Greetings, Kim!:-) Glad you liked it!