In Sane

Rumbles of a mad man Can only be understood by another Crumbs of a loaf The world is tearing apart Humans killing humans Humans are now carnivores Chewing off each other's flesh as a meal Homosexuals on rampage Men sleeping with men Female superiority clamours Religious leaders justify sins Governments run on lies Life mates being picked By how chiseled you look Not by ambition Family has no value Every relationship is a business Deception is the order of the day Betrayal is a norm Loyalty is expensive Even the rich can't afford Money changes everything Even identities Bi-polar people Animals are the new humans What is the world turning to?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 12:20:00 AM

Nice to see this one again

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2015 4:34:00 PM

Mubarak, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/6/2015 6:57:00 PM

Hi Mubarak, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Mubarak Salisu
Date: 12/7/2015 12:08:00 AM

Thank you Miss Sanchez. I hope to write more wonderful poems you'd love

Skat A

Date: 12/3/2015 9:49:00 AM

Mubarak, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Mubarak Salisu
Date: 12/3/2015 10:00:00 AM

thank you skat. I would like to be your "friend" too. i'd holla at you soon

Rainbow Promise

Date: 12/3/2015 9:23:00 AM

Deep my friend, but you expressed how you feel.