John Loving Iii Poet Dramatic Verse

In Sanctum

In a cave where
Light is water
Sight is ruler
Of disorder
Lest the body
Cross the border
Bumps and bruises
Soon discover

In a cave where
Light is air
The next step
May not be there
See the truth
Use some care
In dark places
Light is air

In a cave where
Light is life
One mistake
Your cold as ice
Don't find yourself
In a hole
Where light is the master
And you it holds

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Maureen Lefanue March 1, 2013 at 12:56 AM Hi John, this is a skillful write and it really kept me engaged to the end. Posted 3 more today just for you. Having written over 1,500 poems, there never seems an end in sight. God bless, Maureen

Michael Smith February 5, 2013 at 12:27 PM Interesting piece.

Phyllis Babcock January 31, 2013 at 10:32 AM I see this was a poem from a movie. I do not watch a lot of movies so cannot comment on this. Andrea is the movie buff. love phyl

Elizabeth O'Driscoll January 29, 2013 at 5:12 PM Enjoyed your wonderful write, love Elizabeth

Elizabeth Wesley January 28, 2013 at 8:25 PM Beautiful analogies John, you make it sound so easy but the subject matter is complex and you wield your pen with skill. Love, Elizabeth