B. Maxine Revolution Poet Rhyme

In Response To My First Poem

Lavished Lioness 
Lunges with quietness
Leaks love, inspired with...
Hunger
It aches her when in slumber
It takes her under
Straddling starvation
now just preying on prayers
stuck in a safari of slayers
The hectic hunt continues
Various emptiness in the same venue
Deadlands. Dead things
Then she sees a man.
Lavished Lioness
Lunges with Quietness
sinks her teeth inspired with
Fresh Meat.

Hunter is hunting
He his the hunted
Haunted is he
So thirsty
So drought is his spout
Barely air comes out
Laying with the land 
Can not stand
A rifle he carries
Rustle in the bushes
Something's by the tree
It is she
The one I hunted
and here she comes for me
In spree 
SHE'S COMING

9/27/15

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Eric Boddie October 25, 2015 at 4:19 PM as man we are taught to hunt....the only human who can sexily stunt....and that is woman, my only weakness known....and the Beauty of yall is what b's revolution has shown....;)

Skat A October 2, 2015 at 1:02 AM B Maxine, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***SKAT

Richard Lamoureux October 1, 2015 at 8:52 AM Congratulations on a fine win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 1, 2015 at 2:18 AM Wonderful poem B Maxine n so is the win! Big congrats!

Robert Lindley September 30, 2015 at 10:09 PM Congrats on your win!